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Gary L Taylor's avatar

Beautiful poem. Vivid too, you can see the images as you read.

Arti Mehta's avatar

Thankyou Gary!! I’ll try and do more like this. I really enjoyed writing it!

Devyn Leighton's avatar

I love the imagery here, we write similarly (which I love) 💕 Thank you for sharing!

Arti Mehta's avatar

We do!!! Your stuff is so beautiful and touching. I am subscribing to everything of yours!! 💖

Devyn Leighton's avatar

I am as well, I cannot wait to dive into more of your work 💕